POEM: Suits & Ties
August 29, 2022 by Frances Macaulay Forde
Sketched in Oz by Frances Macaulay Forde © 2003
During nine months of my man in Ireland trying to convince me through Messenger, he should jump on a plane to Oz and we should explore the possibility of rekindling our love of 28 years ago; my heart and my head were at war. The risks seemed too great considering all I had been through. After a bitter divorce, my two wonderful children were now adults, I was making a new life and I had only just learnt to like myself again! (From chapbook 'Exploring Possibilities'.)
Suits and ties…
Your Corporate wardrobe titillates.
Challenges me to abandon -
invite you to swim with me –
in a sea wet with desire.
Throw off your hard shell,
your calm, controlled exterior
and reveal the let-go you.
The knot of your tie,
like seaweed trapping
the unaware swimmer,
restricting your neck -
choking. Stopping words
that reveal your heart.
Speech splinters jab at me
- stabbing me with purpose
pricking my memory of
a shipwrecked love…
laid low in my sub-marine.
I want you to loosen your tie
with purpose, invite intimacy,
soul revelations, as you
breast-stroke in deep water -
prove the want - the known need
to be swamped by passion.
The three-piece suit necessary
clothing - layers hiding…
Providing warmth, weighing
where sun shafts can’t penetrate
or offer paths of lighted guidance.
Relinquish your quintessence!
Allow this sensual drowning -
while arms cleave in swells
of touch, taste and heat -
liquid languishing laid naked
to my reciprocal need.
Dismiss the discipline
of habitual analysis?
Take off those polished shoes -
shake off the weight and surrender
to feelings incomprehensible
to the clever business brain.
Allow unknown, unrehearsed,
unrestrained actions -
releases of reason, to win.
I watch you purposely dive
our murky, bottomless depths.
Hands locked together, arms
pointed straight above your head
protecting - patiently proving
your commitment, your leap
with one compulsive breath
into our eventual eternity.
Frances Macaulay Forde © 2003
1st published in Poets Corner anthology 'Pages Cafe '05' by Frances Macaulay Forde in 2005.
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I like this very much, particularly its use of metaphor.
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Thank you, Liz.
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You’re welcome, Frances.
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